Quote from: AngryRobotsInc on May 05, 2011, 03:31:29 pm
I would word the last sentence as "It is best played on (the) Super Game Boy." The way it is right now is rather awkward sounding.
Quote from: Spikeman on May 06, 2011, 12:26:18 am
I would also change "based upon the game Pokemon Blue" to "based on the game Pokemon Blue"
Thank you for your help, now I've fixed it according to your corrections.
Quote from: tc on May 06, 2011, 11:59:00 am
Are you trying to make Blue look more like Gold? Reminds me of the GSC pokedex somewhat.
Does it? I don't know, maybe it's because of the black background. Actually, now that you point it out I realize that I'm going that way (unconsciously?), as you can see by other edits I've done to the game: