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DarknessSavior
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« Reply #630 on: July 31, 2010, 03:55:44 am »

Quote from: Gemini on July 31, 2010, 03:44:37 am
Quote from: reyvgm on July 23, 2010, 10:53:42 pm
Top Katakana reads "Valkyrie no"
Pretty sure it's Walküre, not Valkyrie (reference). Same word, different languages.
It does, but if one were to translate it into English (and he wants it in English), you would use "Valkyrie".

~DS
Azkadellia
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« Reply #631 on: July 31, 2010, 04:17:31 am »

DarknessSavior:

Is this good enough, or is it too much?
Gemini
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« Reply #632 on: July 31, 2010, 07:46:35 am »

Quote from: DarknessSavior on July 31, 2010, 03:55:44 am
It does, but if one were to translate it into English (and he wants it in English), you would use "Valkyrie".
I wasn't referring to English, though.
bobonga
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« Reply #633 on: July 31, 2010, 08:35:27 am »

I agree with DarknessSavior. "Legend of Valkyrie" sounds better than the other possibilities.
DarknessSavior
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« Reply #634 on: July 31, 2010, 12:52:11 pm »

Quote from: Azkadellia on July 31, 2010, 04:17:31 am
DarknessSavior:

Is this good enough, or is it too much?
The only thing that I don't like are the lower-case and upper-case "s". They're very hard to read. If you could improve on that, I think it looks great.

~DS
KingMike
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« Reply #635 on: July 31, 2010, 01:42:43 pm »

I'd agree, the "s" in Crusade looks almost like an f.
Tauwasser
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« Reply #636 on: July 31, 2010, 01:48:43 pm »

Never heard of fraktur you mussels?

I find it very readable and think it fits really well, actually.

cYa,

Tauwasser
BRPXQZME
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« Reply #637 on: July 31, 2010, 10:02:55 pm »

Quote from: Tauwasser on July 31, 2010, 01:48:43 pm
Never heard of fraktur you mussels?
Interesting epithet there :thumbsup:
reyvgm
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« Reply #638 on: August 01, 2010, 02:37:00 am »

Quote from: Gemini on July 31, 2010, 03:44:37 am
Quote from: reyvgm on July 23, 2010, 10:53:42 pm
Top Katakana reads "Valkyrie no"
Pretty sure it's Walküre, not Valkyrie (reference). Same word, different languages.

The character seems to be officially called Valkyrie, so I guess the title should be called like that too.
Deets
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« Reply #639 on: August 01, 2010, 09:44:58 am »

Quote from: Azkadellia on July 31, 2010, 04:17:31 am
DarknessSavior:

Is this good enough, or is it too much?
I don't mind the "s," but the letters definitely need anti-aliasing.
Moulinoski
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« Reply #640 on: August 01, 2010, 11:31:27 am »

Quote from: KingMike on July 31, 2010, 01:42:43 pm
I'd agree, the "s" in Crusade looks almost like an f.

This. I read The Crufade for Eilence.
BRPXQZME
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« Reply #641 on: August 01, 2010, 12:14:47 pm »

If anything, I think the main problem with the long s is that it’s inconsistent with every other blackletter “s” you see on the screen—including in the title.
reyvgm
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« Reply #642 on: August 01, 2010, 02:42:40 pm »

Why not use the same font used for the text, but a bit bigger?
FlashPV
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« Reply #643 on: August 03, 2010, 11:51:50 am »

Ok this one gave me some hard time but I think it's not bad:
golden
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« Reply #644 on: August 03, 2010, 03:42:33 pm »

Quote from: FlashPV on August 03, 2010, 11:51:50 am
Ok this one gave me some hard time but I think it's not bad:

Looks amazing to me! The way you fit the red orb and the wings - you're the titlescreen champion indeed Smiley
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