Overall, the title screen looks great. The smaller letters look kind of weird though, especially the 'R' and a little with the 'E.' And the "or" between start and continue looks out of place.
That "OR" is Konami's doing, not mine. I'm not moving it.
As for the love soldier bit... I know they look weird. Maybe once I get the stuff reinserted and rearranged I'll tinker with it.