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« Reply #510 on: February 12, 2009, 09:29:04 am » |
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First draw.  |
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Tauwasser
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« Reply #511 on: February 12, 2009, 09:43:16 am » |
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It's really hard to read IMO. You should maybe make it less italic. Like, maybe add 1/3 of "straightness" to each vertically straight edge or something... Also, wouldn't it would probably look better if the letters were larger and the the maybe inset in the m's legs or something..
cYa,
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FlashPV
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« Reply #512 on: February 28, 2009, 08:41:08 am » |
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Ok it's no longer italic and it's more readable this way. What do you think?  |
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« Reply #513 on: March 01, 2009, 07:03:45 am » |
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It looks definitely more legible to me!! Maybe a titlescreen mockup shows if the size is good of not  cYa, Tauwasser |
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« Reply #514 on: July 27, 2009, 05:16:50 am » |
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The game is Megami Tensei for the MSX. I did a mockup of a title screen graphic in English:  The original Japanese graphic:  Is it fine, or should I revise it? |
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« Reply #515 on: July 27, 2009, 09:11:26 am » |
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Maybe a little. the T is definitely too narrow.
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« Reply #516 on: July 27, 2009, 09:15:00 am » |
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The Japanese has randomly shrunken kana (ジ and ビ) in it. It’d be good to mirror that.
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nonme345
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« Reply #517 on: July 27, 2009, 08:10:06 pm » |
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 Better? |
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« Last Edit: July 28, 2009, 05:02:22 am by nonme345 »
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« Reply #518 on: July 28, 2009, 09:42:54 am » |
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Yup.
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Tauwasser
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« Reply #519 on: July 28, 2009, 11:33:12 am » |
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I really don't like the T and R very much...
The thing is, it kinda looks odd in itself with the border around the letters. The original Japanese had wider characters, so the border didn't make the whole thing look too blurry... Yours just emphasizes this with varying widths in some characters.
cYa,
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z-byte
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« Reply #520 on: July 28, 2009, 03:13:25 pm » |
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That looked really cool. The R looks awesome, but I wasn't sure what the a was.
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« Reply #521 on: July 29, 2009, 03:44:12 am » |
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 Barver battle saga title. ATM I think the title we're going to be using is Brave Battle Saga - Legend of the Magic Warrior. Anybody up for this task?  The clouds within the huge Chinese characters scroll in the back so there's no need to include that in whatever you make that will go there, just draw the outline. I'm curious what someone's idea would be for how that title may look |
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« Reply #522 on: August 01, 2009, 05:08:27 pm » |
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any thoughts on this?  (the cloud background would replace the solid blue btw) i kinda like keeping the chinese characters for "magic warrior" there but that's your call. oh and i totally forgot about the barver/brave battle saga thing, i'll get on that. ahem. |
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« Reply #523 on: August 01, 2009, 05:14:47 pm » |
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Whoa, that's awesome! Good job! Could you make text for the grey Chinese text also btw? Djinn hasn't actually mentioned it but I'm pretty sure its his intention to have that replaced too. Left and right respectively are Start and Continue. Really, it's exceeded my expectations so far  |
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« Reply #524 on: August 01, 2009, 05:41:20 pm » |
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glad you like it :D its been a while since i've done a title screen. as for the start/continue text, how's this -   edit: btw i notice the "barver battle saga" text has an animated glow on it, i dunno if its done in hardware or if i'd have to edit every frame - i'm guessing the latter though |
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