Yeah, looks better.

Could anyone help me out with Caravan Heart's title screen?

To give you an idea on how it looks in motion:



The background and the people are animated and wander around. The only part I'd need to change and edit is this layer:



The small Japanese says "Dragon Quest" and the huge text says "Caravan Heart".

If somehow possible, it would be great if the two colored orbs could be incorporated in an English title screen too.

Anyone want to give it a try? The small Dragon Quest text can propably go, but unfortunately a bit of the tents would be missing then (and those aren't layered, so I don't have tiles from "below" the text). Any ideas on how to go about that? Maybe it could say something like "Dragon Quest Monsters" since the fact that it's a "monsters" spin off is completely missing from the original title screen but it would make propably be too long then. Also keep in mind that the Dragon Quest logo is behind and between the two text lines.

It would be awesome if someone could surprise me with a neat title screen

Ok, you got me.

Maybe I shouldn't have cross-posted this, there is also work on the picture being done in another thread: http://www.romhacking.net/forum/index.php/topic,5288.msg82616.html#msg82616

Here is a combination of the work done by me, Ryusui and FlashPV.

Hope its ok to offer up a bit of an edit to that:





When I looked at it this morning, I figured it would work better to build the "Monsters" line into the subtitle instead, so I started working on the whole title. I had almost finished but then reloaded and saw what had been done and figured that "Caravan Heart" looked way better than mine (mine was a lot more plain, and more compact), and just edited instead.

You lose the text at the top, but I think it looks better overall. 

That's why I planned to do but you got me so I used your logo too.
This one should fit since the lower point is the same as the original screen.